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<title>學會這三招，你說的笑話大家都會笑！</title>
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<description><![CDATA[每個笑話都是建立在衝突上的，這裡的衝突，並不是「打架」「意見不和」的那種衝突，而是透過語言的變化，帶給觀眾不同於預期的驚喜。]]></description>
<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #808080;">每個笑話都是建立在衝突上的，這裡的衝突，並不是「打架」「意見不和」的那種衝突，而是透過語言的變化，帶給觀眾不同於預期的驚喜。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #000000;">文 / 惠宇</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">看到這標題，你以為貌似實驗室轉型為內容農場了嗎？期待從這裡拿到笑話界的武林祕笈？</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">很抱歉，沒有這種東西！</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">不過，你絕對沒有白來！單口喜劇演員——博恩，在 2/25<a href="https://www.facebook.com/events/868661193316494/">〈行銷靠北男：段子讓小編的膝蓋好起來〉</a>課程裡，跟我們分享了三個讓段子越來越好笑的小技巧，學會之後，每月的數據成果報告就不用發愁啦！</span></p>
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<div id="attachment_1655" style="width: 827px" class="wp-caption aligncenter"><img aria-describedby="caption-attachment-1655" data-attachment-id="1655" data-permalink="https://www.mouse-lab.com/2018/02/27/punchline/dsc_9361/" data-orig-file="https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?fit=3715%2C2487&ssl=1" data-orig-size="3715,2487" data-comments-opened="1" data-image-meta="{"aperture":"1.8","credit":"","camera":"NIKON D80","caption":"","created_timestamp":"1519573568","copyright":"","focal_length":"35","iso":"500","shutter_speed":"0.005","title":"","orientation":"1"}" data-image-title="DSC_9361" data-image-description="" data-medium-file="https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?fit=300%2C201&ssl=1" data-large-file="https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?fit=817%2C547&ssl=1" class="wp-image-1655 size-large" src="https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361-1024x686.jpg?resize=817%2C547" alt="" width="817" height="547" srcset="https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=1024%2C686&ssl=1 1024w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=300%2C201&ssl=1 300w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=768%2C514&ssl=1 768w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=960%2C643&ssl=1 960w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=480%2C320&ssl=1 480w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=380%2C255&ssl=1 380w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?resize=272%2C182&ssl=1 272w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?w=1634&ssl=1 1634w, https://i1.wp.com/www.mouse-lab.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/DSC_9361.jpg?w=2451&ssl=1 2451w" sizes="(max-width: 817px) 100vw, 817px" data-recalc-dims="1" /><p id="caption-attachment-1655" class="wp-caption-text">先求有再求好，博恩帶大家一步步修改笑話！（攝影 / 柯智元）</p></div>
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<h3><strong><span style="color: #000000;">第一招：用 Set-up 和 Punchline 創造期待和驚喜</span></strong></h3>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">每個笑話都是建立在衝突上的，這裡的衝突，並不是「打架」「意見不和」的那種衝突，而是透過語言的變化，帶給觀眾不同於預期的驚喜。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">比如說，「我在來的路上撞到一個小孩，但是不用擔心」，在這個故事中，一般人通常會預期，應該是被撞到的孩子沒事吧。這時，如果接下去說「沒人看到」，就會帶給觀眾一個衝突的反轉，有機會讓人發笑。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">大部分的笑話和段子，就是由一個個這樣的衝突集合起來的。在「撞到一個孩子」的故事裡，前面那句話就是「Set-up」，塑造了一個情境讓觀眾一些預期，而後面丟出的「沒人看到」，就是「Punchline」，創造了一個不同與預期的驚喜。</span></p>
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<h3><strong><span style="color: #000000;">第二招：先求有再求好－好段子是修出來的</span></strong></h3>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">話雖這麼說，笑話要怎麼改才能更好笑呢？</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">首先，要去掉廢話！太多的廢話會讓觀眾注意力被分散，沒辦法專心進入你鋪陳的情境裡，所以在寫完之也要自己檢視，把非必要詞刪除，讓句子更簡潔有力。同樣的，在選擇詞彙的時候，選大家熟悉、比較口語的詞，也能幫觀眾更快抓到你想要說什麼。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">像是</span></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">「我最近很生氣，因為我結婚 11 年的老婆上禮拜跟我最好的朋友私奔了」</span></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">「比起想念我老婆，我更想念我朋友」</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">這兩個故事，如果修改成</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">「我老婆跟我最好的朋友跑了」</span></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">「我好想念我朋友」</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">一句簡短的話說完（One liner）就有趣多了。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">除了精簡語句之外，也可以用聯想的方式來拓展內容，比如上面的故事裡，「最好的朋友」就可以再從不同的切入點，比如狗、女生、醫生等不同的對象一一展開，堆疊延伸出更多的 Set-up 和 Punchline。</span></p>
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<h3><strong><span style="color: #000000;">第三招：考慮你想說話的對象是誰</span></strong></h3>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">女朋友問男朋友：「如果我和你媽同時掉進水裡，你會救誰？」這個常見的問題，如果是由伊底帕斯來回答呢？</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">博恩在講座現場就舉了這個例子，因為伊底帕斯的媽媽和女友是同個人，所以對他來說，這個問題，根本就不是大問題！</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">但是，因為文化和生活習慣的差異，笑話在不同情境裡引發的共鳴就不一樣，像伊底帕斯的故事，在台灣可能就沒辦法引起很多共鳴。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">而笑話最終是要靠觀眾的反應，共同把整個段子完成，所以就算是寫好了很長的段子，也要考慮到當下觀眾的反應和接受的程度，再來決定要不要把每個段落都說完。</span></p>
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<h3><strong><span style="color: #000000;">笑話背後的「Premise」讓你更出眾</span></strong></h3>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">學了方法之後，就是自己常常練習，累積經驗了！</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">博恩分享自己常常做的練習，就是針對情緒、特定的詞彙，進行聯想，再把這些元素串起來，經過不斷的測試和修改成一個完整好笑的段子。另外，他也建議，要多累積自己的素材庫，在生活中把觀察的感官放大，記錄每個會讓人發笑的素材。</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-weight: 400; color: #000000;">此外，他也提到，這世界上沒有意義的內容已經很多了，如果能創造出比較有意義，背後有特定想要傳達的理念或價值觀（Premise）的內容，好好包裝後，會很容易脫穎而出。</span></p>
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